1. Huwag ‘yung first page pa lang, may nangyayari nang kababalaghan. Romance novel ang isinusulat mo, hindi porn. Kahit nga sa porn, may build-up pa ng scene bago ‘yun. Not that I know these things, nabasa ko lang rin, huwag kayo.
2. Kung may ‘BS’ man, dapat kailangan sa story, hindi ‘yung basta na lang maisipan, This is the part where you should consider the feelings of your readers. Hindi uubra ‘yung unang meeting pa lang ng dalawang bida, magki-kiss na or worse, may intimate scene na. Your readers will feel betrayed if you do that. Now, if you really want to have it in the first page, pangatawanan mo. Dapat may justification.